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Comments from Don'sdick
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-07-15 04:11:30 | Jenny wants to be a slut - Pt. 1 | Those naysayers can't give you any tips on improving. They are just some dumbasses that can't write, and some of them wouldn't know the difference between a story and a documentary. That being said, I'll tell you that I voted positive on your story. It's a STORY! It's FICTION! The idiot that made the comment about Motor City doesn't know his shit. It's been Motor City for a hundred years and still is. As for me, it was a good enough tale for me to want some of Jenny's young pussy, myself... and I've posted about 80 stories on XNXX. Incest is my favorite topic, you might try one of those. Perhaps a few more spaces in your format, for easier reading, but good job on paragraphing. KEEP WRITING.. |
| 2015-07-15 04:16:13 | Jenny wants to be a slut Pt 2 - Wet games | Good follow-up. I wish it was a little longer.......... the story and my cock. |
| 2015-07-15 04:23:18 | The Ugly Duckling Pt. 1 | WOW! Good one! How 'bout a space every eight to ten lines... easier to read. Good fuckin' story, Ma'am. |
| 2015-07-16 15:38:02 | My unexpected brotherly fuck | Oooohh Nice.. I love incest stories... I love incest, period. |
| 2015-07-18 17:02:34 | Raunchy Sex | It was sure easy to pop my nuts on this one... thanx! |