| 2016-08-10 15:55:45 |
Lily's awakening - Part 6
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Looking forward to the next chapter. I do get the distinct impression, however, that Lily was not even 18, but for the sake of publishing. Having not developed tits yet and a bald pussy suggests youth. The story is great, though, so please keep it cumming. |
| 2015-08-15 03:49:11 |
My Birthday Vacation - Hooked (Part 2)
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Pretty good story.... very poor grammar. Learn structure. |
| 2016-08-21 18:01:05 |
Twins n best buds IX
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Great series. |
| 2015-08-24 14:23:03 |
A different day
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English is not your first language is it? Good story, but bad grammar and punctuation. Hope your other stories are better. |
| 2015-08-21 02:00:36 |
My Twin Sister's Birthday-Sleepover Weekend (Chapter 1)
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Not a good story. The narrator/dude in the story seems just a bit narsassistic. Unbelievable at the very least. Not even a very good fantasy. |